vox nihili

amazing cross hatching/hatching plus shading. You are a very talented artist indeed to be so accurate in pen'n'ink drawing. I could, (i am an eraser-dependent!) but it'd end up lookiing ...

I basically have nothing to say that anti-pop hasn't. So I'm going to *shouts: I second Anti-pop's motion* and slinks off into cyberworld. Cheers! --Voxina

ERm... I could go through the whole thing and pick it apart for the inevitable impossibly small nitpicky things that happen in every poem, but instead I'll say this: what ...

Wow. is all i can say. very good poem. you utilize words so that you grip areader and make 'em care 'bout 'dis birdie. very well written. you have an ...

here it is: "Shit. Shark." I curse. My body starts shaking: Large convulsion-like waves Wrack my core with fatigue. I should journey Any number of leagues If it would allow ...

ookay. the first part is a dream, no(question mark) but then you don't tell us what kind of animal was ahiving the dream.... I got kind of confused reading ti. ...

:? Number one: if this is by edgar garcia, then this needed to be posted under the 'other' forum. You post things that YOU have written in the fiction/nonfiction/poetry forums. ...

This is a very, uh, personal kind of poem. Completely true, and yes, another Tourette's poem. FYI: Th involuntary spasm-like actions called tics. Hope you enjoy, but I'm really just ...

This is part three, as I have promised. Hope you enjoy! So I lost the notebook where a lot of the in-between parts are located. it is my regret, but ...

Thanks so much for the reviews, everybody! I just posted a tiny bit more, and there, I humbly swear upon the YWS coat of arms-- will be a part three ...

A word on my opinion of the rating: it should be pg-13. And let people know what kind of a read they are in for. I didn't realize that it ...

Thanks for the input! I just added a little more to it... Cheers! --Voxina

I have to say, I second Squall's words. I love the simmilies, and couldn't bring myself to really be nit-picky on the first readings because of the wonderful ring this ...

Very beautiful. One thing, though: the title. Hippocampus is the region of the brain that stores and sorts memories... xD So maybe you might want to change it to something ...

This is a realistic fiction story...hope you enjoy! _Feedback welcomed_ ;) Ten-year-old Katie Wheeler sat, watching TV. Her brother Jim sat in his baby chair, staring at nothing as he ...